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Last published Sun, May 21, 2017
A beautiful life was ripped apart...but from what?
A girl jumps to her death to find peace with herself and its the talk everyones talking about. little do people know, every single person has something to do with the reason, but what made her jump?if not who made her jump?
police investigate the crime scene and examine loosely , carelessly even, until a piece of information spreads like a wildfire and their attention is caught in the net once again. theres a trail to follow up-listen closely and you'll discover the dirt in the investigation; and everything that follows.
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