Negative Space
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Ongoing<5 mins
Last published Tue, May 23, 2017
A small effort to express my falling apart relationship. I wrote it to my 'special' one a few days before. Just tried to let out our conditions and state.
Sometimes we feel disappointed and yet a flicker of hope amidst that gloom points only towards positivity in the same darkness.
A masterpiece is admired by one and all.
And yet an artwork is just a clever mix of negative spaces at the right places and the right proportions!
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