No Control
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  • Reads 5,416
  • Votes 355
  • Parts 15
  • Time 2h 16m
Ongoing, First published May 23, 2017
Mature
Same old Christian and Ana, but with a twist. Inspired by The Fall. Christian Grey is dark, everyone knows this, but what if he was worse than we thought? What if he had secrets beyond what we already know? And what happens when he meets Anastasia, the girl he plans to make his next victim? 

Trigger warnings and all that jazz, this is a dark story so expect some dark content. No plagiarism intended but I have read a million fanfics so some things may sound familiar, its not that I mean to copy, its just that my brain has stored the info and forgotten where it came from. THIS IS A WORK OF FICTION INSPIRED BY THE CHARACTERS FROM FIFTY SHADES OF GREY AND SOME IDEAS FROM THE SHOW THE FALL, ALL CHARACTERS AND IDEAS BELONG TO THE ORIGINAL OWNERS. 

Also don't worry..its not gonna end in tragedy, this is a love story.
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