Not coming back. (Louis Tomlinson fanfic.) ~BEING EDITED~
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Last published Sun, Jan 26, 2014
He was my best friend.
He left.
I told him I loved him.
He left.
I begged him to stay.
He left.
I cried every single night.
and i know
He isn't coming back.
What i have concluded from re-reading my stories is that they are all shit. So i shall re-write all of them. I'm starting with Not Coming Back. I wont change any main details i'm just re-writing it to fit my needs. I love everyone reading my stories. (Which is no one.) But i will rewrite all of them. Thanks for listening to my rant. cx
I will put a ~ beside the Chapter name if it has been edited. !!!
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