Ruined Innocence

Ruined Innocence

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Last published Sun, Aug 4, 2013

In Kansas city, there's a boy name Richard McVick that lived with his normal family; his life was usually as always, until a serial killer, Larry Less, got out from prison. On May 12, 1975, Richard was just playing in his backyard, until the serial killer kidnap him. When John and Nicole came outside to call for their son, he wasn't there. After days and days of hiding from the FBI, police, and the special ops, Larry taken Richard to a abandon farmhouse and raised Richard as his own. After one month, Larry began his murders again, except he take his victims to his home, so he can slaughter them and to teach Richard how to kill. After twenty years, Richard became known as the Shadow Beast because of his horrible murders, until one day. His Father and a 59-year old FBI agent search for him, and try to stop him before its too late. ( In the process of writing)

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