Civilization Overview for Critique and Comments

I've long since worked on this project and have gone through several stages of rewriting and refining but have recently come to the point that I can no longer further flesh out this society on my own and though I have asked for any questions they have about the civilization as well as their opinions from others before this will hopefully be the first of a sizable scale.

So what is the civilization? At first it began merely as part of a world building endeavor for a short story during my school years. Later a Dungeons and Dragons campaign in which the players and dungeon master all had a part in creating both the world and story I brought back what was only a rough outline and needed to further define it. During the process of refining it for the campaign I found that I thoroughly enjoyed creating a society from scratch to the point that I have even created a language (spoken and written) for the society though it is just as subject to reworking as the civilization to which it belongs. Since then I have continuously used the civilization as part of the setting or as the origin of a character to keep perfecting it, but unfortunately I have come to the conclusion that even using various scenarios in stories and role-playing games I need many more points of view than my own.