The Mystique's Critique Booth
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Publikasi terakhir Kam, Jun 1, 2017
GOOD DAY TO EVERYONE!
Since you're here, you probably have the idea on what's inside this book. From the title itself, it's a critique booth, where we, the members of Mystique Family, will be making a critical judgement of your work/s. The purpose of this book is to help you improve not just your work/s but also you, as a graphic designer. Hope you handle criticisms like a pro!
So if you have problems about your graphic, this booth is for you!
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