He was always there but I didn't know it

"Am I being curse by something?I don't get what happened to me? Why does everything have to be so wrong, why can't I be with someone I love?" Yuki has her very first boyfriend. 'He asked her out in middle school and she doesn't even know why she even agreed to date him, 'Maybe it's because he was popular and she wanted to be noticed more or maybe it's because her friend wanted her to say yes.' Well she said yes to him but it didn't end up well because all Hiroshi was trying to do was destroy her image. Her first love was just using her to get back at his ex who he still had feelings for, when he 'confessed' to her. Then at last she found someone she loves who loves her back for who she truly is but in the end, he dies....
Finally she comes to the conclusion that she is cursed, She can't fall in love with anyone and if she does... Well you know how it ends. She meets the ghost who had cursed her and finds out that in order to break the curse she must go back to her grandma's house and be a priest. When she gets there and meets the ghost, she is informed that she has two choices. One: she gives up her life to save the person she loves or two: They both live but her one true love, Tomoseran, will forget everything about her and the ghost can possess her any time she likes
read to find out what decision she make...:)
Please leave me comment and tell what you think, or if there something i need to change i would happily do it
OH GUYS ON CHAPTER 17 HALF OF THEM GOING TO BE A GIRL TALKING AND THE OTHER HALF IS TOMOSERAN TALKING LIKE HIS AND HER POINT OF VIEW...
AND GUYS EACH DAYS I'M ADDING A NEW CHAPTER I DON'T KNOW WHEN IT GOING TO END BUT I HOPE THAT Y'ALL LIKE IT
"Thanks for the help yaoi-lover"