Origins

This is a practice run for the full trilogy I hope to write in the future. Please leave any possible feedback on how you think my story could be more enticing. Origins is about a world where divine souls came down to earth and took over all living creatures and their bodies. They formed animals together in what is called soul convergance and the current world now lives in a futuristic world with uniquelly mutated creatures where there are no communications barriers or discrimination of a creature for the way they appear. the protagonist is an engineer trainee who hopes to venture the world in hopes of finding her inspiration for creating masterpieces, like her father. She makes and loses allies along her journey, whilst being threatened by the antagonist for her family's past.