Little Bit of Magic

This is a complete rewrite of "Magic Within". I actually decided to scrap that and start anew. Honestly, I like this one way better. It's better written, I fixed the problem with the story's plot line (there was one thing I couldn;t fit in smoothly on paper) and I changed the names into something I like more. Hope you guys like it.

Jaye Peltier never really believed in things like magic. She never believed in things like the tooth fairy, dragons, or those little gnomes that steal your left sock. It wasn't that she was a strange little girl, rather, it seemed to make her dad uncomfortable. But one day, her dad doesn't come back from work, and Jaye is forced to move in with her crazy aunt in Bar Harbor Maine. There, she starts seeing things that don't look....right. One day, she follows a strange looking firefly and ends up tumbling into a place that puts her pragmatic view of the world to question. Will she be able to survive in this new world long enough to get back home, or will she fall victim to the hands of a desperate king?