In For The Long Run

Ok, so this isn't how I usually write. I know it's not that good and there is a lot more that could be done with it, but I didn't want to be writing it for too long. I would like to hear feedback for it so that I can use that towards my other writing. I wanted to finish this story as soon as I could which is why it's not that long and everything goes really fast. This was written in three days, so it's obviously not going to be the best. Thanks for reading if you do. ~HulkOut