Broken promises #missiondesi
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Last published Wed, Jul 11, 2018
"I promise you that I will always be there for you." Tears rolled down my face, thinking about what he always used to say. Where are you now, when I need you the most? Why did you break your promises?
Ayesha travels to Pakistan with her family after 2 years for her cousins wedding. She meets her second cousin Bilal there. She starts crushing on him, but the only one who knows is her cousin/best friend Alina.
During the wedding, Ayesha and Bilal do everything together, they dance, they decorate the halls and have fun together.
They keep on annoying each other, but they become really good friends after a few days of hanging out together.
But Ayesha has forgotten that she is only in Pakistan for 2 months, and then she will go back to UK and continue with her normal routine.
What has fate written for them? Can they hold their promises?
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