Winter's Night (#Wattys2017)
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This short story is about two young people in vastly different circumstances brought together on one frigid winter night. This is not your typical romance story, but is more focused around how one single act of kindness can change a person's life.
I've intentionally left these characters nameless for this story, because giving them names would place the emphasis of the story on them, and not what happens between them.
Feedback that I've been given thus far [in person] by those who have read it have requested that I continue the story further, and perhaps I will if enough people are that interested in reading more for this story.
Comments and Critiques are welcome and encouraged. If you want to see more done with this story like my other readers have, just let me know.
~~~~~Feedback~~~~~~
+Lighting_Stryker wrote:
Being quite honest, when I first clicked on this book I expected to read another one of those 'boy meets girl' kind of stories, but boy you proved me wrong!
Your characters have such depth and character and your writing style made conversation flow naturally and realistically.
Plus, I personally love the little details that you added about the scenery and their feelings. It was just the right amount of information to enhance the dialogue without getting the reader sidetracked from what was happening!
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