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Ongoing, First published Jun 08, 2017
There were mice moving around my feet, but I had to muff my scream. The small casket where I was hiding had now started to get suffocating. Through the small keyhole I could see the men taking these girls away  promising them huge dreams of better life. 

Better life?

This "better life" cost me my purity.


Yodhodara belongs to the lowest caste in the Vedic Era. She is a Shudra, She is untouchable, She is regarded as bad luck. Even if someone crossed near her shadow they would go wash themselves thirteen times. This was her life. People say this was the cause of her previous life's karma and she has to suffer and live with it.
But thats the thing, she's not ready to take whatever is being served in her plate. She's been stubborn and a fighter since birth. And she just can't understand why the upper class doesn't let the Shudras thrive even a little. And most importantly what does the sun birthmark at the back of her spine mean? 

She's here not to serve, she's here to make them pay.



If you guys life historic and all the badass fighter stuff then go for it. 
I promise I won't disappoint you. 
The timeline of this story is around 300BC where India was under the evils of the caste system. And still in the 21st century this evil has not been completely eradicated from people's mind. 
I hope for a change you guys will like this story.
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