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I review and critique books for any who make a request.
- Request through PM
- Don't pester me. I will get to you when I damn well feel like it, I have a job and a life outside of Wattpad
- I will either post publically on your book, privately through pm or in this book as you may wish. Please specify in pm.
- I will not hold back if a request is made. This is agreed once you've made a request so if you get offended by my comments, it's your problem.
- I DO NOT garentee looking through each page of your book. I may stop due to boredom or seeing overall issues and summarising as need be.
All I ask in return is a look at my works. A small price, I think.
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