Recueil de critiques de livres
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Un recueil de critiques de livre (sur Wattpad ou non, je préciserai).
Vous pouvez inscrire votre livre.
Je vous demanderai toujours l'autorisation avant de faire une critique sur votre oeuvre.
Je donne une note sur 20 et je commente en fonction des critères suivants:
- orthographe du texte .../5
- originalité de l'histoire .../5
- attrait de la couverture .../5
- application dans l'écriture .../5
- +1 BONUS si le titre est original
Je ne critique pas les histoires sur les thèmes suivants:
- Horreur
- Loup-garou
- Mystère/ Thriller
- Spirituel
- Vampire
-Je fais aussi des covers-
-Cover by me-
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