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Hello and Assalamualaikum wattpad reader ❤ author nim comeback again !! Hahahaha joke lah dear 😂 start from now author nak buat satu place / zone for haters yg suka mengkritik ✨ cakap je pasal kritik confirm haters suka , yay or nay ? Zone ni author akan copy ayat daripada golongan ii haters yg byk menghina kpop and islam !! 🌚 Nanty author akan mengkritik haters balik eh dont worry sbb author takkan mengkritik awakk sehingga menyebabkan awak tersinggung and terluka but author akan menasihati awakk okayyyy 💁 actually haters perlukan kasih sayang daripada kitaa semuaa 💯 anyway jgn lupa untuk vote zone ni dan fanfic author You're Mine Park Jimin ( hehehe sempat lagi author promote ff ) .
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