When Hell Expands

When Hell Expands

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In a future world that is so renowned, Dominito and its Decrees rule over the frightened population. Peyton and Alexa, two orphaned girls, lived as quietly as the rest, never stepping out of line. If they did? A public skinning...death. So they kept it clean. One day, though, Peyton's little sister is murdered for wandering into Felling Forest, a now forbidden area. Distraught and grieving whilst watching her little sister get beheaded, she sees numbers. The date of death of Evelyn Plough. Alexa, meanwhile, sees a vision of two magnificent horses rampaging...and that's only the beginning of their story of betrayal, abandonment and secrets...in a world like Dominito, you have it all.
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