Sensibilities | Deetranada AU
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Spiteful words make for lasting first impressions. Is it possible to overcome or will it lay the foundation for mistrust and secrecy?
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He takes her hand gently, his eyes unrelenting. She holds her breath, unsure of what was coming next. 'I'll always wait for you.' He whispers softly. 'B-but why?' she questions, averting his eyes.
He lifts her chin forcing her to look at him, her eyes brimming with tears. He gently kisses her forehead, placing his against hers. 'Because you're worth every moment.'
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