All great things, regardless its size or difficulty, requires time. Poems are no different. I have written each word of my poem as though it were a single brushstroke in calligraphy. When completed, like calligraphy, the poem links with no loopholes. Not like nuts and bolts fit, but how each piece of a puzzle fit perfectly in place.
The poem 'Monday' is quite odd and i cannot emphasise the importance of paying attention to the punctuation, otherwise, it will feel like it does no flow.
I hope you enjoy and realise that the pen has the power to create worlds and that the characters within are very much real. We are the god to our writing.