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Complete, First published Jun 17, 2017
I'm not truly a writer nor good with words. I'm just a normal person trying to know who he/she really is. I can do lots of things. But for now, I think I'm gonna apply writing stuff.

         So I wrote this story based on a true story of the whole class of grade 7 and turned it into a magical but dangerous adventure.

          This story is about a girl hoping for her high school to turn more exciting than her sixth grade, but turned out to be less than she expected. As time passed she already missed being a sixth grader. So she wished to turn back time before she graduated but it was impossible for her to make it happen. Until...

           A ring she found in their retreat at her classmate's house. A ring with crystallized pose, indicated with aqua colors, and made of white gold with tiny blue crystals lined straight. A ring, that would change her life forever, if she succeeds.

          So join in as the student remark on an epic journey full of deadly viruses, colorful tents, and also tricky challenges when one wishes to turn back time and stop space. From dimension to dimension, few will survive, and the rest? Death! Unless...

           You read the story first excellent reader! Not to spoil anything but... To be honest, my story is awful... I expect lots of bad comments. So... hope you like it!
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