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I'll keep breathing til my heart stops
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Ongoing, First published Jun 17, 2017
«- I don't Know okay ? and I don't wanna think about it. I just... Just wanna past my time to think that everything will be okay. Escape to this world even if it's for a few minutes... Do you understand ? 

[...] 

He looks at me as I am crazy.

- I swear, my love, that i'll keep loving you til the end of this fucking Life... 

- And I'll keep breathing til my heart stops... Stops beating for you. »


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This is my First english book ! So please help me ! I want a lot of critics ! I want to perform my english  so let's go !

Hope that everything isn't Wrong as all.
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