Protect them and They'll Protect you
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Ongoing12m
Last published Wed, Jun 28, 2017
I'm not good at writing descriptions so it's just a fanfiction about DRAMAtical Murder .
I'd like it if you would give me some feedback on my story. So if you like or not you can just straight up say it sucks, I really don't mind it's your opinion, but tell me how I can do to adjust/improve the story so it can be a bit more to your liking.
I'd also like it if you spot any grammatical errors to correct me.
That's all I want to say, thank you in advanced for reading my Fanfiction and helping me improve my writing skills. Oh and please comment.
Thank you for checking out my story.
P.S.
I'm not a very sarcastic persone in reality and frankly I can't catch when my own family is being sarcastic so in simple words my sarcasm is really bad.
So sorry in advance and
Thanks Again.^u^ "tehe"
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