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"I gave you everything. I gave you my heart, my soul, and I loved you the best I could. I'm not very experienced with the whole love thing, but I tried my best. And I thought my best would be good enough for you, but I guess not." Lafayette snarled through devastated tears, the comforting kindness in his eyes had vanished, leaving only anger. "You told me you were fine waiting for me. You told me that you'd wait as long as you needed to because the fact that it was going to be me was the important part. Not what we were going to do. It wouldn't of been that long... You wouldn't of had to marry me or some bullshit like that. I'm just fragile, and still don't know what I'm doing and you told me that was okay! How could you... I would've been fine with it by the summer... How could you?"
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