The First Legend
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The First Legend is the story of Neo, who is doomed by the prophecy given by the stars, since all kids with the Mark of Destiny die making them true. But his mentor won't let this happen; he shows Neo that his life is worth living, that he can do much more than sitting down and wait for death.
In the middle of a revolution, something bigger is going to change. Now there, a story about making your own destiny, let's see how Neo becomes the First Legend!
(If anyone could help me review this, my English is not the best, it would be great!)
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