The Red Line

The Red Line

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Ever since Gideon Clain could remember, he'd seen the lines. There had always been two, the green one bright and shiny, reeking of good fortune, looking like invisible paint that some one had painted right in front of everywhere he went. The red one, the color of a stop sign, just as bright and just as shiny as the green, but something in it was just so... Full of malice. Like a dessert you can take a half a bite of before feeling sick to your stomach. So obviously, Gideon always took the green line, and because of that, multiple good things happened
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