The Comet
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Last published Fri, Apr 20, 2012
First story, please read, so David Carter, a guy who has been dead for five years and has been brought back to life. He has amnesia and remembers only a girl, and it's a very powerful memory. He and his newfound friends go to search in the middle of a war. Does he find her or not, wanna know? Read it. Oh and a lot of people die, wanna know who, read the story.
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