Jacksgap

Jacksgap

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I unzipped the top of my bag and widened my eyes as I surprisingly had found a bunch of men's clothing. *knocking on the door "Yes?" I said as I opened the door and was met by Jack standing in front of me, holding one of my bras. "I think our bags got exchanged-" I snapped the bra out of Jack's hand and hid it behind my back. "Do you mind if I get my bag?" Jack asked and pointed at the black north face bag on the night stand. "Sure. Can I-" "Yeah, of course!" He exclaimed as I went across the hall to his room to fetch my bag. The first thing I noticed was the low pitched roof of his room, which was painted white like the rest, and the room itself was kept very neat disbite all the Xbox games, spread out around his flat screen. There were all kinds of small gadget hidden around, especially in a big bookshelf, filled with pictures and things saying "jacksgap". The bag was on his bed and it was opened wide so you could see everything I had taken with me, including all of my underwear which he'd obviously picked up and put back into the bag. I lifted the heavy bag with both hands, as it was still open, and went out of his room and across the hall. I wasn't looking ahead and crashed into Jack for the third time today as both our bags were still open and all of our clothes got mixed up as they fell onto the floor. "I'm so sorry" Jack apologised as he sat down to sort his clothes out of the huge pile on the floor. "No, I'm sorry," I said and got down beside him, both of us awkwardly picking up our clothes as fast as we could until we took hold of the same tshirt, and looked up at each other. His eyes were dark green and almost mesmerising as he slowly leaned in.
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"Yaz?" I smiled as Jack's eyes got wide. "How did you survive? I mean...I saw the Daleks kill you Yaz. You were dead!" Jack still astonished hugged me once again very tightly this time. "She helped me. Rose. The blonde girl...I saw her. In my head. With the Doctor and you. And when I opened my eyes again. The daleks were gone and I was alone. The ship was completely empty and I couldn't do anything but close my eyes. Rose had saved me and I was going to die anyways. All I could do was wish I was home, and when I opened my eyes I was standing in front of my house.... 3 years after I disappeared." "You...time traveled?" Jack asked confused. "That's not all Jack." I looked at Jack's waist and quickly grabbed his gun putting it to MY head and fired it. "YAZ DON'T!" A few moments passed and I opened my eyes gasping for air looking-up at Jack. "Jack. I need to find the doctor. I need him to fix me." -- "Sometimes to save all, you have to sacrifice some." -- "You aren't just Yazmin Tyler, you need to get that through your head. You can't keep making these stupid decisions with the power you hold. You hold more than you think. The TARDIS didn't just CHOOSE you!" I was startled by Rose loosing her temper. "The TARDIS gave you part of her, you are Time and Space itself...just like her. You need to remember Yazmin." Before she or I could say anything else, like a poof of smoke she just disappeared. "Hello!? WAIT YOU CANT JUST LEAVE ME AGAIN!" I yelled still on my knees in the middle of my living room. "Please. Please I don't know what I'm doing Doctor." I whispered as I silently sobbed. "Jack...where did you go?" // I just really wanted to make a TORCHWOOD/ Doctor Who story cause til this day it's one of my favorite shows. Knits me living out a random fantasy, don't mind me honestly

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