Críticas.
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Last published Tue, Jul 11, 2017
¿Qué tal si aquí comentamos que hace especial una historia?
Varios factores son lo que las componen y aquí vamos a criticarlas.
¿Por qué me aburrió?
¿Por qué me pareció increíble?
¿Qué fue lo que me llamó la atención?
¡¿Por qué es realmente mala?!
Etc...
Si quieres que la tuya sea criticada, ¡Mándanos mensaje! Y recuerda que son críticas constructivas, pues tratamos hacer que tu obra resalte de entre las demás.
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