Tough

This is a rewrite of my badly written story "Not there when wanted. There when unwanted." It's a good story but I realized how badly it was written mouths after writing it.
Description:
Brandy is a smart, beautiful, talented girl that is humorous but is cold hearted. What did you expect she's been cheated on , impregnated, and abandoned by the first person she ever gave her love to. Meaning her first boyfriend, first kiss , and first sexual partner. I get I know. You have to relive her past to understand her present and pay attention to her present to predict her future.
But the problem is do you think you will be able to read this story? You'll have to try to no the answer. You'll under stand it all at the end hopefully.