Freedom Is Great, Thank You [Scomiche] - Mit dt Übersetzung

This story takes place in a class society. There are the rich people, who can do what they want. The half richs have workplaces and have to do higher jobs like IT or teacher. And then there are the poor or inferior people who basically are barely existent. They can be killed or arrestet whenever the superior want to.
Mitch Grassi is a 16-years old boy from a half-rich family. His little secret is: He has a friend from the inferior society, a poor guy named Scott. After a precarious situation, Scott gets caught by the police. Mitch descides to run away from home to rescue his very best friend. As they find each other, they plan to break out of the city, which is surrounded by a big wall. (I Know, that reminds of Berlin in the 1940s)

This little story was a task for my english class. We were supposed to write a short story about human rights. I just thought, this would be a good idea, and so I chose Mitch an Scott, so I could easily upload this (And I'm not sure, if this was a correct sentence, but I don't care, because it's very late at night and I appreciate, my teacher won't ever see this... At least I hope so.) He, my teacher, said it was a very good language, which makes me very proud of this, so I descided to upload it to hear your opinion about this.
I'm german - by the way - so, if you find some... mistakes or stuff like this, please write in the comments beloooow. That would be sooo nice.
Enjoy the most you can, it's kind of sad... I guess, And I left out some actions, because it was too long for one lesson. Forgive me. And thank you for reading, that means a lot to me.