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What He Wouldn't Give (Edited Version)
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Ongoing, First published Jun 28, 2017
Mature
This is the edited version, I am keeping the other one up so people can still read the story even if it won't make the most sense. But I am creating this version so people who haven't read it yet can just read the edited version. Updates will be slow as editing is a painstakingly long process. So here is what the book is about. 

Eli Carter... Lost his mother due to cancer when he was only 16.

 Luke Carter... Lost his wife, lost his job, now on the track to lose his life. 

Life turns black for the both of the Carter boys. Emotions skyrocket between the two, leaving Eli in a dangerous, but tight spot. With an alcoholic, abusive, and dying father, Eli joins a competition whose grand prize is just the right amount of money to pay for a kidney transplant. But will it be enough when Eli unravels a shocking truth about his biological father? 

In a world where everything is betted against Eli, this is a story of what he wouldn't give.
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