days in the past

days in the past

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hi this is my first fanfic and its about my two favorite characters goten and bardock . I would love it if i got feedback on what i messed up on or if its good or not so please help me out disclamer thingy i do not own dragonball or dragonballz or gt or even super just so u know ok
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Hi there! I'm new to writing and this is the first ever story I've written. I know there are going to be a lot of mistakes since English is neither my mother tongue nor my first language. So I would appreciate it if readers give me constructive criticism rather than hating me for a few mistakes. I thank you in advance for reading my story. Now let's dive into the story. Shall we?

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