hi this is my first fanfic and its about my two favorite characters goten and bardock . I would love it if i got feedback on what i messed up on or if its good or not so
please help me out
disclamer thingy i do not own dragonball or dragonballz or gt or even super just so u know ok
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This is my first fanficition story so please don't judge. I tried my best it's probably horrible but I hope you enjoy it.
I don't own Bnha characters they belong to their rightful owners.