Glitches
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Glitches is a story of a young man at the end of his rope. A suicidal young man that, from every other vantage, has absolutely everything the world has to offer. He is engaged to be married into a very rich family and afforded every whim imaginable. And yet he is tormented and he doesn't know why. Then, on a random day, Ben accidentally stops time. Stops it cold. He watches as an jet hangs in the sky without moving. The clocks in his apartment are frozen in place. And yet, he is able to move around and interact with life as though nothing happened. And this is only the tip of the iceberg. He soon realizes there are entirely other schools of mental powers and not only that, but that they come very easily to him. And then, during one of his glitches he notices a woman that seems to be outside of time as well and aware of what he is doing. Ben's red headed muse as he would soon come to call her. Were there others with powers like his? Can he find her again? And more importantly, will Ben realize that there are many who do not want him to utilize his powers at all? And that is when the first hitman arrives to silence him forever. Glitches is an underground world of paranormal societies seething and pulsing just underneath societies normal view. Houses, Skills, and assasins all move freely in order to do the bidding of these silent communities. And Ben has just stumbled into the scariest question of his new life... "I wanted to commit suicide before, but now the redhead may just be my real undoing." Glitches is a NaNoWriMo book I wrote last year. Its a 411 page novel with almost 90,000 words. I will be posting a chapter a day until all 36 chapters are here for your review. Can't wait to hear your ideas and critiques!
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'I had never known how it feels to be lost in an other person's soul until the glimmering blue eyes of a massive girl's met mine. Those eyes find themselves in search of mine whenever mine looks down. Those eyes came to the rooftop at the cafe to console mine and now those eyes are staring at me as I revealed the hidden feelings of mine which we clearly know what's between us. I can wholly realize they always have to make me cozy and hypnotize into 'em. If this is called friendship then I've no clue what LOVE is,' 'Dude what the hell are you talkin' about?' Everyone were shocked. 'I'm just.. Uh.. Saying that.. She's more than a friend to me,' I swifty rolled my eyes after I mentioned her. ~~~~~ Sometimes, unexpectedly our life descends precisely the way we don't want it to. The story begans just so when the couple messed up the conversation which eventually leads to a outrageous break up made him to descend into a dark gloomy phase. As much surprisingly luck was around, they confesses they still have feelings and reciprocates after decades of time, makes him anticipate way more than the reality. But the fact is, reality is way more than we anticipate. This is apparently where the life takes another tint. They were less acknowledged that whether the destination of them would tend to favour. Will they find the love which was lost? Will they be back together? [word count : 40,589]

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