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Determinant: One choice will change everything

Determinant: One choice will change everything

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"Even now, I feel the electrical pull that every touch creates with her. And I know it's unique to her, something I'll never feel with anyone else. I pull away, knowing if I stay any longer I'll never have the strength to do this." Full-length alternate 3rd book with a completely original plot and a very satisfying ending. Works instead of "Allegiant" or after it.
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christina
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So, the ending to Allegiant sucks tremendously. I mean countless tissue boxes have been wasted while reading it. So I have created an alternate ending. Veronica Roth is the author of this wondrous story line, and sadly I'm a homily fan girl. I'm not the best writer so there's grammar and spelling issues, HUGE ALLEGIANT SPOILERS! This story is to HELP YOU COPE; BTW THE COVER IS CROOKED CUZ I TOOK THAT PIC OF MY VERY OWN ALLEGIANT BOOK SRRY!! ************ This story takes place right after Tris was shot.

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