The Giver By Lois Lowry: Alternate Ending

The Giver is a children's novel by Lois Lowry. It is set in a society which is at first presented as a utopian society and gradually appears more and more dystopian. The novel follows a boy named Jonas through the twelfth year of his life. The society has eliminated pain and strife by converting to "Sameness," a plan that has also eradicated emotional depth from their lives.
I rewrote the ending of the novel for a school project and thought I'd share it:) let me know what you think.