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Ongoing, First published Jun 29, 2017
"You used me. You let me believe you cared for me."

"You would have preferred threats and coercion?" the antagonist replied. "I would have got what I needed from you, either way, it merely seemed kinder to do it pleasantly and with the illusion of your free choice." They studied the protagonist carefully and took a step forward. "Nothing has to change, we've made a great team." 

"But it's all a lie!"

The antagonist closed the gap the rest of the way and cradled their head. "You couldn't tell the difference. You thought I loved you - does it really matter if I actually do or don't if it feels the same?" 

"Of course it matters - I - stop it. Stop talking. I need to think." 

"And I need to know you're not going to do something stupid if I let you do that, I would prefer this not to get violent." They stroked the protagonist's cheek. "But I need you on my side, here."  



This is a writing prompt made by the-modern-typewriter on June 25, 2017. Again the first couple paragraphs are NOT mine, but the rest of the story is my ideas based off of the-modern-typewriter's prompt.
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Eliona's War 3: Lethal Healer

73 parts Ongoing

When the truth comes out, there's nowhere left to run. Season 3 of Eliona's War *** When Seth received a new virtual reality video game from his uncle, he wasn't expecting to get swept up into a whole new world called Eliona. As it turned out, Eliona and its people are far more dangerous than Seth could ever have imagined. There is a real consequence to playing this game: it's changing him, and it might not be for the better. Now that Seth/Severance knows the truth of Eliona, there's no going back. Eliona is dying, and in order to save it, he needs to beat a very difficult dungeon before anyone else does. And on Earth, things are even worse. It's come to light that Eliona is leaving a mark on its players, and suddenly, everyone wants to be involved. Players find themselves with a target on their back, and Seth? He might just have the biggest one of all. Too bad for them, he's done running. *** Weekly updates on Tuesdays and Thursdays. Wait & read for free, or unlock with coins-the choice is yours!