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Ongoing, First published Jan 09, 2014
Infinity Morganson has lived in the dome her entire life. Their city is as perfect as it can be. There are no criminals or imperfections and if there is, they are sent outside the dome in a life of shame and exile. She grew up hearing stories of the outside world. It is full of chaos and violence. Nearly all who are sent out, die within the day.

   She is arrested for a crime she didn't commit and is sentenced this life in exile. She soon finds the stories to be true.

 

   Espen Kastello is the son of a wealthy inventor. His father is the creator of most of the common technology of their age. When Espen raids his father's room, a chain of events lead to a tragic accident ending with an innocent girl being exiled.

   His father soon passes all his secrets to him and Espen discovers that the 'perfect' world he's been living in is actually cruel and corrupt.

  This story is undergoing editing and is rated PG-13 for violence and such. It's not bad but there's some so I thought i'd warn you. That's it though. 


Thanks watergirl_10 for the amazing cover!


Revised chapters are written but until enough people want it posted or until I write more, it's not being posted.
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