The Exiles (1st Draft)

The Exiles (1st Draft)

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Infinity Morganson has lived in the dome her entire life. Their city is as perfect as it can be. There are no criminals or imperfections and if there is, they are sent outside the dome in a life of shame and exile. She grew up hearing stories of the outside world. It is full of chaos and violence. Nearly all who are sent out, die within the day. She is arrested for a crime she didn't commit and is sentenced this life in exile. She soon finds the stories to be true. Espen Kastello is the son of a wealthy inventor. His father is the creator of most of the common technology of their age. When Espen raids his father's room, a chain of events lead to a tragic accident ending with an innocent girl being exiled. His father soon passes all his secrets to him and Espen discovers that the 'perfect' world he's been living in is actually cruel and corrupt. This story is undergoing editing and is rated PG-13 for violence and such. It's not bad but there's some so I thought i'd warn you. That's it though. Thanks watergirl_10 for the amazing cover! Revised chapters are written but until enough people want it posted or until I write more, it's not being posted.
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It's the era of Transmigration. I wanted to possess a body of a rich young lady in a Rofan childcare novel, and live while receiving lots of love. No. 1 to be avoided! No. 1 in frustrating the reader! I possessed someone inside an infinite return novel called: Return Until the World is Saved. Forget being a young lady from a prominent family, I will soon be ruined because the survival difficulty of the original work is S-Class. I became an extra. Ellet, the young daughter of a servant in the Count's manor. We are poor, but it's a happy life between a kind brother and a good father. I've got a best friend I've never made before because I was always busy. Even the gods of the Transmigration Management Bureau are openly fond of me. I'm living a life full of confidence. On top of that, I accidentally bought the 'After-Life Insurance' full package just before my death. I leveled up with the high-speed growth buff, and diligently destroyed the original plot. Thanks to plenty of special privileges, I came to give satisfaction for all the frustrated readers of the original work. "You wiped your face with your dirty hands." "......." "Don't be surprised. It's because I have an obligation to be kind." And then, there's the protagonist who is still nothing more than a handsome push over, Thesilid. 'Why is he being this crafty with me?' © Author

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