Unruly (Short Story Version)
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A tragic mystery and adventure poor Aladoran has gone through. Living homeless with her brother who provides them with necessities by desperately taking up a dangerous life as a drug dealer in order to earn money. But life throws in rough patches and Aladoran finds herself seeking revenge. This is a story of revenge.
This is the original version of "Unruly", but I am lengthening it into an actual mystery. I'm trying to make it more suspenseful and mysterious. Check it out in my profile, "Unruly".
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