Bad creepypasta vs not good but okay creepypasta

Okay... In your eyes you may not see these as creepypastas... Possibly because the second is gonna be seriously long.. Probably not even good, but it'll be better than the bad!

This is where I try take the cliché creepypasta stuff and turn it into a story, then try write an original one that actually sounds good... The only problem is, it'll probably be so long!!!