Where it all begins... (Discontinued)

On occasion, I will develop a thought. That thought, when correctly molded, can turn into what I, and some others, think to be an awesome story concept. This is where I intend to use those concepts in an actual story, with actual characters and an actual target for development.
Basically, these are one-chapter stories, showing only a fragment of the worlds within my illiteration. Feel free to tell me how you may feel about a certain story or idea, and what alterations you believe will improve the quality of the story.