Last Life Part 1: Homecoming

Last Life Part 1: Homecoming

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Who wouldn't want to live forever at first glance? The human race is rash. We never gave the thought a second look. Our technology was advanced enough to save us all. Right now, nanotechnology is being created to possibly cure cancers as well as many other terrible illnesses, but in this story, we decided to run with it. Programmed to fix what it could and replace what it could not, microscopic robots manifested themselves in a manner unfathomable to their creators. But by the time they realized their mistake, the technology was already released globally and spread faster than any virus that has ever marred the face of the Earth. Nanotechnology that promised to heal our broken bodies and enhance our minds, proved to be easily our worst nightmare. We took our chances against mother nature . So we suffered the consequences. (includes illustrations which I am slowly adding) Highest rank: #113 *Author's note: This is a very long story- the first draft ran 120,000 words and 90 chapters, so be patient if you so choose to climb on board this berserk train into madness. Don't be dissuaded, this being a far more recent draft undergoing major changes, I plan to condense the story and greatly change the original plot. **READ THE STORY IN ORDER WHY DO Y'ALLS KEEP READING THIS OUT OF ORDER IT WON'T MAKE SENSE
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