Transformation

Hi this is a story i wrote for a competition for school i may or may not carry on it depends on what you guys think or I may just carry it on because I want to.
Summary...
A young girl, who's called Cinder, gets a really big scare when she gets home from school one night. Five years later she's still trying to find the people who tore her life apart. With her best friend holding secrets she doesn't know who to trust. Trapped in a world of nightmares, which she can't outrun, she finds herself trusting someone she shouldn't....The enemy. But is that what he really is.

(This is my first story so pls no hate)