Her Name Was Promise
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Last published Tue, Aug 8, 2017
Tonight I made five mistakes.
Little did I know, this would soon change my world.
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Suddenly I found my voice. "What are you doing!"
My first mistake, shouting.
The figure looked up. Tears, glinting like diamonds, gripped to her face. I ran to her. Somehow I knew she would not stop clawing at the dirt.
I decided to help her.
My second mistake.
She tried pushing my hands away. Suddenly she stopped, panting from the adrenaline rush. Tears still running down her beautiful face.
"What's your name?!"
"P-promise...?"
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