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Mahalagang MGA paalala: 

*HINDI PO ITO STORY, HA? LILINAWAN KO LANG NAMAN.
*MASUNGIT ako. Kaya expected ang brutal na criticism. (Pero mabait pa rin naman ako basta mabait kayo.)
*Offending man o hindi, dapat i-accept niyo. Atleast behind my harsh comments, mai-improve mo na ang story mo, orayt?
*I'm not the best critique so far but I'm assuring you that I'll do my best according to the greatest capacity of my brain.

Geh, babush. Basahin mo nalang kung magpapa-critique ka.All Rights Reserved

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