Let Him In
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Last published Wed, Jan 17, 2018
I could see the pain in his eyes but smile on his face could've fooled you, "Just because your eyes don't tear, doesn't mean your heart don't cry." I scoffed at this, "Listen twat, I didn't ask for a cup of hypocrite with a sprinkle of bullshit this morning but by the look in your eyes; you're no different than I am."
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Danielle Cruz is an 18 year old girl that never had to lift a finger for anything. She had friends, money, good grades, and a loving family. This didn't keep her mom cheating on her father. Day by day Dani's life is falling apart, but what happens when no good Trey Brooks tries to save her?
You know what they say; you can't save someone who doesn't want to be saved.
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