A Chance to Change~PJ&TO ff

One day, I wrote the first chapter in a notebook, and decided to extend on it. I decided to write it on here so others could see it. Enjoy! Be sure to vote and comment!

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Percy Jackson is done with life. He curses the Fates for making him live this terrible life, and wishes they would just cut his string. His fatal flaw of loyalty is like a curse. He isn't a hero, at least in his eyes, he let all those people die.

Percy is slowly killing himself from the inside. He doesn't eat, and doesn't sleep. But nobody notices. He keeps it all hidden away. But what happens when his father, Poseidon, decides to visit him after a fight with his brother, Zeus, and catches him crying?

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Sorry if it's a terrible description, but I'm not great at making descriptions. Anyways, don't judge the book on the description. You never know, you may like it! At least read the first chapter.