Broken Spirit
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Last published Tue, Nov 27, 2018
Welcome to the end of the world, a place of ruin and fire. Where everything is dead, people, plants, animals. Everything. If you have survived this long, that means you've either killed people or joined a Vile. But no one survives on their own for long.
In a world where people have lost hope and everything they had, the only thing they hang onto is religion. Which can be deadly.
Groups called Viles are religious groups that take young women in and teach them to be pure saints, and the women who run them are called Divines. Viles believe if they purify the people, it'll purify the world, and if you step out of line, you'll be killed. But what they do to the boys is worse. They train them to be soldiers, to protect the Viles, with their life.
Each Vile has a different belief, but they all have the same goal. Purify.
Erin and her brother have been running since birth, trying to survive and stay hidden from the Viles. But once they get caught, all hell brakes loose. Erin and her brother Dylan are separated. As Erin tries to get her and her brother out of the Vile before theyre dead, her brother is busy getting trained for a war to come. Erin meets friends, but there are enemies everywhere in the Vile. Erin will have to break the rules of the Vile to escape alive with her brother, and she'll find our the reasons behind her capture.
But it all comes down to this.
Its time to purify.
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Disclaimer, this story is not to hate or bash on any religion. This book is only for entertainment purposes. I believe in religion and I think all religion should be expressed.
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