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The Promise
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Ongoing, First published Jan 14, 2014
It's felt like eons since this story was first ever published onto Wattpad. It had it's up and downs and at one point, I genuinely thought that I wouldn't be able to pursue in this story and I was actually going to take it down but after some persuasion by some of my friends, (you know who you are,) I pressed on and managed to finish it. I was pretty proud of myself when I finished it but now I've read it over again, I don't really see how anyone has actually liked it but thanks for that anyway! -Janelle, 13

Right, guys, 2016 update now, I'm almost 16 and I've read this story and I've just realised how crap it is so sorry for messing up the hobbit for you all but I'm not deleting this Becca it's my first full story. Sorry for making such a bad story but that's for reading it to make my 13 year old self feel a bit important. -Janelle, 15

Update, 2019, age 18; I am so sorry for absolutely butchering such a beautiful story with such beautiful, in depth characters who I clearly didn't study since I do not believe a single characters characteristics are accurate.
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