PataPommel
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Last published Mon, Jul 17, 2017
(MLP X PATAPON)
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Coco Pommel, the meek, quirky and anxious young Bridleway dressmaker, had been struggling to bring her life back to what it used to be after her quitting her position as Suri Polomare's assistant. When she gets the opportunity to visit Ponyville, she rushes to the village in an effort to make up for the Saddle Row incident and understand how to be herself.
She asks herself, 'What could go wrong?'
Chaos lords, inter-dimensional portals, and a resulting ponyhunt across Equestria could go wrong. And whatever is going on at home is only half of her new problem- being stuck in a land where she's either mistaken for a goddess and the ground she walks on worshiped... or lunch.
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